If you want to see, you have to Look.
Hi, John.I read (on right of page) that you're still trying to take a great photo. Very subjective. Maybe even self-deprecating. Or perhaps an attempt at taking the micky out of fine art photographers?Maybe, if you consider that this posted pic is a celebration of a moment in your photographic journey (life?), where you observed something important to you, it's elevated your attempt to the wished for greatness?
John, I think the picture works. I think it's a mistake always to look for a "strong center of interest" rather than try for a picture that works "all over." A wealth of detail distributed all over the picture frame can be intriguing rather than messy.